# Pitch Critiques

## v1 — 2026-02-15

### Tim (human) critique

1. **Too much ops, not enough research.** This reads as "deploy tools into workflows" — but the real pitch is: find, build, develop *unique approaches*. Not just adoption — creation. Research-driven, not ops-driven.

2. **"Who breathes this" substantiation is weak.** The point isn't "I'm dedicated." The point is: there *will* be breakthroughs. a16z is supporting companies powering 2/3rds of AI revenue. You need unique systems in-house. A person born to do this will *drive the breakthroughs* — not just adopt, but invent.